After completing draft 1 of our World War I job descriptions, 7Explorer started to think about how we could help each other to improve and develop our work further.
We discussed how peer critique could help and the protocol we use when doing this. Working in pairs, we were kind, specific and helpful with our feedback, making suggestions about how our partner’s writing could be developed.
For example, Caiden suggested that Lacey-May could include rhetorical questions to make her writing more persuasive.
Lucie-Mae suggested to Ruben that he could be more specific when outlining the daily roles and responsibilities for a sailor in the Navy.
